 Paradise Found is the end of the journey for Amelia. She’s endured a lot in her 16 ½ years that amounts to more than anything an adolescent should experience. Whereas the previous story centers on Amelia’s escape from her father, now Amelia is finally free. She has her family, her crush Gabrielle, and new beginnings with the civilization of Esoterica. Life should be looking up, but Amelia finds herself more confused.
Even though Amelia is free to do what she wants, she’s still a teenager, who’s trying to find herself. In this installment, Amelia’s feelings for Gabrielle flourish, but she’s unsure if her crush feels the same. Not to mention, the rest of the bunch at the apple farm at Esoterica isn’t what Amelia expected. Esoterica is supposed to be paradise, but it appears the place has some trouble. Amelia can’t handle it. Even though she is a teen, she does what anyone might do – run from her problems. By this time, the story takes a slight turn as Amelia takes a road trip with some old friends to figure out what she wants in life. By the time the road trip is over, Amelia must decide. Between chapters are interesting facts that relate to the changes happening in the novel. Sometimes these passages are long, but they can be informative. Some of the secondary characters’ physical descriptions and dialect are a bit bias, but because these characters are so minor their depictions can be overlooked. This last book focuses more on sexuality, freedom, and new civilization. I think it’s a good conclusion to the series, but it did leave me wanting a little more. Purchase Paradise Found here
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 With the author's permission, attached below is an interview about her novel Esoterica. I believe this interview conducted a few years ago will give readers a better understanding of the "Living in Secret" author Cristina Salat. You can purchase Esoterica here. Here's the interview below:
How did you come to write a sequel to LIVING IN SECRET? Truthfully, I've always known what the next steps on Amelia's journey were...plus I really like these characters, and wanted to spend more time with them. It just took awhile for the rest of society to catch up enough for me to be able to do the next parts of the story justice! Does ESOTERICA, or the novel that preceded it, come from your own life experience? Yes and no. None of what any characters in any of my novels live are specifically experiences from my own life, however they are all real life things many people experience...and circumstances I care deeply about. Characters from a different novel THE SKIN OF WATER: DEFENDING THE DREAMCATCHERS also appear in ESOTERICA. Was this intentional? Actually, I had no idea Pipsqueak and later Missy from THE SKIN OF WATER were going to play a pivotal part in ESOTERICA...until all of a sudden they appeared. That is how the kind of writing I most enjoy goes for me though. I'll know the subject matter and main plot points when I sit down to begin birthing a novel, but then (unless I am under deadline) I just let the story take us where it wants and needs to go. Which means, just like for readers, there can be surprises for me too along the way. How do readers respond to your somewhat unconventional work? I'm delighted that reviews and mail I've received over the years are generally characterized by comments like: "(this book) became my favourite book for about 2 years and I read it 3 times after that. I loved it every time. It's such a truthful and organic story and it's what first introduced me to the brutality and reality of the world -gay and everythang! *warning - very emotional ending* but I think it's something everyone should read at least once in their life perhaps best in the teenage years but great either way." I used to often feel ahead of the curve with things like civil rights for all and the fact that no parent or family member should ever be raping their young relatives — which seemed blatantly obvious to me — still considered "cutting edge" or "controversial" by society at large. It was mighty frustrating sometimes, when agents and publishers wanted me to tone down the parts of my work that felt viscerally important to exactly the stories I was trying to tell. But these days — as each new generation arrives on Planet Earth and sets a new tone regarding what's important to them — it seems as if more and more people, especially young people, are interested in things like tolerance and change and creating a more peaceful, fair sense of community, locally and worldwide, for everyone. Yay. I guess I was just a millennial ahead of my time! ;) ESOTERICA ends with a new set of adventures Amelia could choose between. Will there be a sequel to this sequel?! Yes! Believe it or not, when I began writing the "end" to this character's first (LIVING IN SECRET) story, after having gotten requests to know "what happened?!" for years, I was thinking in terms of perhaps just offering an epilogue to the original story. After all, by 2015 gay people were legally able to marry, which meant that aspect of custody battles was no longer as fraught with drama as it had once been...so perhaps I would just give the characters the happy ending they so richly deserved? On the other hand, right from the first draft of Amelia's initial tale, I was aware of other paths the realities of parental kidnapping and custody issues go down...so I knew a whole second book about that was possible. And when I sat down to write, that is what poured out. Not an epilogue. A full second book. A sequel. And in the midst of writing that, the inklings of yet a third novel — i.e. what happens after where ESOTERICA leaves off — started coming through. So yes, the sequel to the sequel — entitled PARADISE FOUND — has just flowed from my pen: https://www.amazon.com/ParadiseFound-Gathering-Dreamcatchers-Novelebook/dp/B07DS7FGVZ/ Readers who enjoyed seeing what became of characters from the San FranciscoNew Mexico novel THE SKIN OF WATER will be happy to hear some special individuals from that novel were apparently meant to show up in this newest 'Dreamcatcher' novel too. And actually, since this collection of books aren't all 'sequels' per se, these days I'm just calling them: 'Gathering The Dreamcatchers' companion novels. Stay tuned! :)  If you want a captivating mystery story, you need some tips from the experts, so here are a few. Although you may have your original story and you’re eager to tell it, read some of your favorite mystery novels to discover how to do mystery right. Learning from the best in your field gives you a chance to be better than them. Remember you need a short, punchy idea to attract any reader and make them dive into the story. The killer hook should come early and cause a dilemma. Begin with a striking incident and then build the tension. Let the tension be consistent in every scene.
 Maybe I’ve been watching too many Hallmark channel movies, but I’ve thought about writing romance. Sometimes, I think it’s an easy genre, but then I remember all the effort that must go into making the main characters likable. No one’s going to root for a weak lead character. So, I figured why not offer some tips on how to write romance?
If you are going to write about romance, remember that every story should prompt readers to rally behind characters of their choice. It is one of the most important elements of a romance story because emotions drive the plot in the writing. Some more tips for your writing include: Create flexible characters who will build up through the story
 Make sure you get your copy www.amazon.com/Bedwetter-Journal-Budding-Psychopath-ebook/dp/B07NSG5XTS/ and visit leeallenhoward.com
When I was a child, I talked like a child, I thought like a child, I reasoned like a child. When I became a man, I put the ways of childhood behind me. 1 Corinthians 13:11 I believe that everyone must grow up. After a while, we outgrow childish habits. Adulting is necessary. As adults, we have responsibilities. We can no longer indulge in childish things. Then, there are some people that refuse to grow up. Maybe they are spoiled, neglected or traumatized. Russell Pisarek in Lee Allen Howard’s The Bedwetter is one of those adults. The Bedwetter is a psychological thriller, like Girl on the Train, and being inside Russell’s head, is truly a psychopathic experience. Russell has a warped sense of humor he shows in his digital journal he uses to describe his daily activities. In present-day Pittsburgh, East Liberty, or “Slibberty”, as Russell sarcastically calls it, he writes events in chronological order. The journal entries include pictures, vivid flashbacks, and a foreboding dream with electric hair trimmers. Russell is a pariah to society. He judges others and obsesses over animals, especially cats. He feels like everyone demeans him, so he rebels. Sometimes, the offenses are minor, and other times they are criminal. His lashing out serves to distract from his truth: he still wets the bed. Russell dubs another term “pissing hour” to describe the time during his dream that triggers his bladder. The dream is the same and it haunts him. Russell is determined to find its meaning. The bedwetting is a result of Russell’s troubled childhood and flawed relationships, making him a psychopath. Russell’s sister Becky, his nephew Aiden, and Connors at Hap’s Army Surplus are people that have close relationships with Russell. Besides those three people, Russell doesn’t have any close relationships. Russell has no luck with the ladies either. He claims they don’t understand his “pissue”, a term he jokingly uses to refer to his bedwetting. Part of the reason Russell is terrible with the ladies is due to his mother. Russell refers to his mother as “Melanoma”, which shows he views her like a disease. They have a volatile relationship. Melanoma punishes Russell during his childhood by shaving his head every time he wets the bed. Russell never forgives her. She is the bane of his existence and the root of his troublesome dream. The turning point in the story happens when Russell encounters “The Piss Fairy” in his recurring dream. By then, his budding psychopath is in full bloom. He can only move forward and complete the ominous mission “The Piss Fairy” has for him. Lee Allen Howard provides great attention to detail, and the plot is evenly paced. I would read more of his work. I give The Bedwetter five stars and I encourage anyone, who likes an enticing thriller, to read this story.  If you want to write science fiction, or sci-fi, make the most of your time. Observe some common rules and tips to create a captivating story that will make the readers ask questions. You can also include questionable characters. Proceed to make the story complicated, but do this slowly. Consistency is key when writing science fiction. Character definition matters most, so make sure each character is detailed and unique, not just representatives of stereotypes of their species or cultures. If you are planning to release a book series, focus on one book at a time instead of the entire series altogether. There are plenty of inspirational pieces about sci-fi. Right now, I’m feeling “Love, Death, & Robots” on Netflix. Find what inspires you.
 Writing Young Adult (YA) Fiction is tapping into the mind of teenagers and young adults from ages 12-18 and understanding their issues, challenges, taboos, and concerns. Here are the tips to write a compelling one.
 Thrillers need enticing, gripping storylines and nail-biting scenes. Here are the tips to write great thrillers.
 Fantasy writing requires imagination and the power to create a world within a world. Not to mention, that inspiration needs to translate into the craft. Here are the tips for how you can write fantasy below:
 Mariah Carey released her album "Caution" recently, and there's one song "A No No" that sticks out. Besides the "Crush On You" sample (which always sounds good), the song seems like a no-nonsense anthem, and I like it. Mariah Carey is basically saying "no" to situations without benefit.
I think the "no" mentality is helpful. The post picture above says the following: "I don't say no because I am so busy. I say no because I don't want to be so busy." This year in my business I learned how to say no. I say no because of WIIFM, what's in it for me? I think sometimes you have to be selfish. Each move I make I wonder if it's beneficial to my business. Also, I try to make sure my business goals are aligned with anyone I wish to partner. I don't want to waste my time or the other company's time. I feel like I owed it to the people that checked my blog to let them know what's been going on. Midway through the year, my business goals changed. I noticed that during my speaking engagements, the adults talked to me more about writing a book than my target audience for my young adult (YA) books. I started off the year promoting my YA books at events, and then I realized I liked editing and reading other people's work more. Consequently, I haven't done any writing or events lately. Just because I haven't been writing or attending events lately, doesn't mean I won't write again. This year I've been taking time to find my business voice, and it's been very fulfilling. If you're interested in buying any of my books, you can purchase them here or check out my Service link for your writing needs. I hope you'll continue with me on this writing journey. I plan to have more writing events to come. |
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